Life and death make me wonder
Thoughts upon which I often ponder
What keeps the cycle of life going?
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This is a fabulous philosophical work Bipasa! Appreciated the way you have penned it. My favorite lines, " I am conscious of my mortality/But some say nothing is a reality" Wonderful expression with great rhythm and rhyme!
Highly philosophical presentation. Queries and explanations are often fascinating as well as intriguing to an inquisitive mind. Thanks for sharing. This goes into MyPoemList. Life and death make me wonder Is everything an illusion or maya?
Is everything an illusion or maya? I also have questions on karma....ye s i must seek........ until i find no answer.. still i seek........ dev
Where philosophy fails to reply a question, spirituality comes forward to reply it. A thoughtful poem.
A wonderful and perceptive write, Bipasha. A never ending questions that we have to deal with in our every day lives.The last two lines are pragmatic thoughts.10
I must seek well to know! I think this is the of our existence.Nice write dear Bipasha Dutt
Beautiful display of fine poetic skills in a poignant piece elegantly brought forth with insight. Inspiring philosophical rendition set as for serious reflection. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
A great write! ....I am conscious of my mortality But some say nothing is a reality....Very candid expression of a budding poetess..God bless you!
URIBABA, KI SHOKTO SHOKTO WORD RE BABA, TUI ELE ARSANAAL E BOSE PORBO, MANE BUJHIE DIS. EMNITE BHALO LEKHA HOYECHE
I must seek well to know Only then answers will show.No doubt questions are intriguing. But the determination is so strong in the poem. Nicely crafted one. Thanks for sharing. Binaya.
Great poem on a great topic. If I may say Bipasha you are just in time of your life when we have more questions than answers. But answer lies in your last lines of poem expressed so well. Keep it up.
Thank you Ma'am for your kind words. Yes, in my case questions are many and answers are few.
An insightful piece of poetry. My great pleasure revisiting this excellent poem.