Monday, April 30, 2012

Intrigue Comments

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I throw my soul into the flame
Intoxicate my mind with smoke
Let my body wander
Dizzy are my senses with sounds unfamiliar
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darkness reigns
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Sandy Player 27 December 2012

Excellent. A personal, deeply sad and dark poem that doesn't have a hint of asking for sympathy. It unfolds in a tragically beautiful way. The last line explodes in it's shocking sensitivity. Great poem -M

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