Friday, September 30, 2011

Intoxicating My Being Comments

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I was hiding from a light
growing brighter and brighter
on a day when the sun rose
earlier without any warning,
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Marieta Maglas
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Stefanie Fontker 30 September 2011

Very beautiful. You've presented some amazing metaphors here, and some fantastic lines. 'On a day when the sun rose earlier without warning me, ' I believe this is my favourite one. Great writing.

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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