The bright blue scarf of the clear sky,
The dazzling gold of the yellow sun,
The cold, tickling drops of sweat (on my hot brow)
Intoxicate me.
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This is an intoxicating poem, your words are absolutely spectacular. I give this a (10) and will keep it as a favourite. That's two favourites from you this morning Asma, what a wonderful way to start my day. Thankyou for the pleasure of being able to read you literary treasures this morning.--Melvina--
Asma i love your writing lady... this is excellent writing...10 can`t be anything less for this... i think i will read all your poems... well done..
Shows a real feeling for and identification with nature and the universe. Very pantheist in sentiment
Am reading your works. Very nice feeling and I especially like this one. thank you for your comments about my 'Hope Flutters'. I too wrote one titled 'Intoxication', if you click on my home page you can read it. We seem to be somewhat alike! ! ! Sincerely, Susan B
Asma Intoxicated is my kind of intoxication.Lovely poemo Take care Roger
Asma, nice mix of Heaven and Earth... all natural and beautifully done! Brian
This is an intoxicating poem, your words are absolutely spectacular. I give this a (10) and will keep it as a favourite. That's two favourites from you this morning Asma, what a wonderful way to start my day. Thankyou for the pleasure of being able to read your literary treasures this morning.--Melvina--