Tuesday, January 2, 2007

Intoxicated Twigs Comments

Rating: 3.5

Raised on slim chances,
And taught to feast on increased poverty
To survive in pretense and fear!
These children of tomorrow
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Declan McHenry 02 January 2007

Lawrence, that is superb. I am glad to have chanced on this today. It is great to know that someone still writes with meaning. Thank you. Powerful. Powerful indeed.

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Francesca Johnson 02 January 2007

Superb! Wonderful analogies. Sincere message. Love, Fran xxx

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Tailor Bell 02 January 2007

very appropriate social commentary, Lawrence. I enjoy the style and think it reinforces the subject well. fine work. -Tailor

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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