Thursday, May 15, 2014

Into Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eyes staring back at me are filled with so much pain.
Eyes filled with sadness, overflowing, forming rivers as tears drain.

The eyes staring back at me are so consumed with fear.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 May 2014

Hi poet Debbie. This happens so much and it is so sad, so sad. I enjoyed this heart touching poem. Loyd

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Akhtar Jawad 15 May 2014

Sweet but sorrowful memories, when we lack someone, producing feelings that create such beautiful poems.

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Bill Cantrell 15 May 2014

A really nice poem with very good rhyme and at the same time..question, the last line is awesome!

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Captain Cur 15 May 2014

She's there, I hear her in your poem. Nice write Debbie.

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Debbie Casey

Debbie Casey

Augusta, GA
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