Sunday, December 30, 2012

Into The Wild Comments

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Peaks painted white, Below the gallant purple clouds,

snow fields patched with green trees,
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Bri Edwards 31 December 2012

i like this, especially the last two lines (especially the part in parentheses) . some of the words, i think, like ROVING, WADDLE, and TATTLING, are not the ones i would choose, BUT i get what you mean. maybe those verbs are used in other countries differently or more often than i am used to using them here in united states. i like the feel of being in the wild (except for going hungry) , but i, too, seem to need people and i guess love is nice too.....if they are available.. thanks for sharing.

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Mukesh Parmar

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