Monday, February 15, 2010

*into The Translucent Morning Comments

Rating: 2.6

Into the translucent morning
a lark soars singular
and larkspurs crowd the garden walk
waving pastel spikes to the sky
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Gertrude Morris 15 February 2010

I agree with Fred wholeheartedly. It is a lovely poem, making you think of cool breezes, and children playing, flowers swaying. Simple and sweet have never been so wonderful as this.

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Fred Babbin 15 February 2010

Lovely. simple poem. Many times, less is more.

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