Into The Shadows Comments

Wow. I don't know how else to put it. Amazing diction and vocabularly, it gave your poem such a sense of how I imagine you wanted it to sound. It really felt, to use your words, dark, sinister, murderous. My favorite lines were 'The moments where you break free of humanity... / Where you feel like you can do anything.' That's something I would expect someone older to say. Very mature. I give it a 10.