Friday, September 21, 2012

Into The Shadow Comments

Rating: 3.5

Come; let us walk towards the water's edge
through soft green grass, adorned with wild flowers.
Sheltered on a blanket spread, we will stretch
beneath the shadow of the Alder's boughs.
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Diana Rosser
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Ruth Walters 30 September 2012

beautiful, and your use of language is superb

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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 30 September 2012

Beyound words to qualify. Great work.

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Indranil Bhaduri 21 September 2012

Beautiful...that's what I can say..

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Thomas Hsi 21 September 2012

I really like your poem, the wonderful images of nature, the sentiments of love. Your poetry is an open book of how you feel. Thanks!

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