I walked out into the rain
And promptly ran back to the shade
But this attempt was not in vain
As it gave me the courage to try again...
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While a lot of poems have been written on overcoming fears to achieve success, I liked your presentation. The rhyme scheme, although not very pleasing, does work out well and is decent. Nice write Sumali. P: S: In the line 'But now my mind on a different plain...' The word should be 'plane' and not 'plain' - a minor typo there 😊😊
Wah Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet ... your choice of words .. so poetical