Friday, November 29, 2013

Into The Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Into the morning rhythm now
The key is out the lock;
The kettle's bravely boiling
As I glance up at the clock;
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John Carter Brown
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Susy Evelyne 13 December 2013

An honest write. Life isn't all energy and 'go-go-go' like in the annoying adverts. It must have been one of those dull November days. A few rays of sun would produce a different poem.

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

Though each day seems a little harder it is great to greet another day I enjoyed this wake me upper-fine job

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Lorraine Colon 29 November 2013

Some days are like that - why bother getting out of bed? Well written.

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