Into The Mist Comments

This is a wonderful poem, very nice writing.....10

You are so young but your poetry is fantastic! You really have a grip on what it is to write a poem, reflected by your topic choice and perfect meter. I am very, very impressed... you have no idea how many 15-year olds (girls, especially) spend their time writing about broken hearts or that hot guy they saw at the seven-eleven. Kudos to a blossoming teenage poet.

Such an insightful poem, reminds me of the 'The road not taken'.

Paige you write with an air of a celtic poet, I love it and you are not afraid to tell a story in poem form.I have a 11 year old grandaughter named Paige, I'll have to show her your poetry. Your parents must be proud.Stick with it.I was in my 40ty's before I ever let any one read my poems.Very good. Cheryl

You are a born poet Paige. The message and composition is outstanding for your tender age. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and leads the reader on a journey of discovery. Congratulations! Karin Anderson top marks!

Paige, this is beautiful, just simply lovely and I can hardly believe it came from a fifteen year old soul. I love it and it will go in my favorites. Susan