Tuesday, December 29, 2015

Into The Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dream a horse, a cat, a dog,
A butterfly.
I ride into the mist.
Cat prowls on my left flank.
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Robert Eckstein
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Howard Savage 10 January 2016

Great poem with structure, keep writing.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 December 2015

good dream, good life, I like it..

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 29 December 2015

Very nice and vivid images with active motions for each, and profound thoughts that carry weight and impact in the end lines.

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