Oh it is dazzling here again in lone night
I come away in heartbeats to see sky tearing blue
as if total void snaps in its rune by the blue voices
passion ingenious flows onto the yonder pond
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Another strong fine piece.....weightful composition! .....10+
this poem is overflowing with emotion, very well written indeed.
I have read several of your poems. They are well written and deep with imagery. Writing to me is like a song fill with overtone imagery subtle with complexity of harmonies wrapped in a catchy tune. Words and there construction are like music to my ears. When I write it follows a melody in my head and flows like a waterfall through my laptop. Where it comes from I don't know.
Loved it...you are a true true and truest poet...loved the way you described everything..it was really very beautiful and soothing.. Love Gul
The picture that you poem is painting is vivid and true.