Saturday, October 7, 2006

Into The Lions Den Comments

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thinking about it now in the solitude
of this poorly lit station i could never
have done it, to enter the lions den
with nothing but a controlled calm.
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Joseph Daly 07 October 2006

A very sombre but expressive poem Vincent. 'She always hated that picture' is an excellent line, in fact that whole stanza is great; almost a poem on its own. The narrative of this is very laid back, yet there is a great deal of tension underlying it. That duality works very well on a poem such as this. The conflicting emotions are well detailed and exhibited. A strong write!

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Amanda Lukas 07 October 2006

Back to Vincent now, huh? Nice work!

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