Into The Lions Den Comments

A very sombre but expressive poem Vincent. 'She always hated that picture' is an excellent line, in fact that whole stanza is great; almost a poem on its own. The narrative of this is very laid back, yet there is a great deal of tension underlying it. That duality works very well on a poem such as this. The conflicting emotions are well detailed and exhibited. A strong write!

Back to Vincent now, huh? Nice work!