Sunday, June 7, 2009

Into The Land Of Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

into the land of shadows
light always plays with trees

the trees hide what light
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Sebastian Soberania
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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''the sun in full force heats up sadness screams'' the ancestral personification of the sun...excellent idea...good poem..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'the sun in full force heats up sadness screams shadows of trysts and traces of glimpses now lay dead like daisies' Amazing sad composition,10 from me.

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