Saturday, September 15, 2018

Into The Heart Of Truth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crowded lives of steam and star dust
Adorning the scenes of a cosmic theater,
Playing as souls get hooked,
Stretching them from malice to kindness
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Abekah Emmanuel 18 September 2018

Indeed, this is the truth, and it always radiate that consciousness and awakening in us. After reading the poem for the third time, I realised you might have chosen the blank verse to symbolise that awakening and so there was no need to limit the truth with strict rhyme pattern. I am in a hurry to see love seated on the Throne of Peace and end this trivia dance of worldly matters. Great work of art!

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