Into The Future I Take A Peep Comments

You are so talented. What a wonderful poem.

i know you so talented so keep move it nice work meriam i love it

very well written you have a good imagination.. keep it up

Every thing is as you said. And growing older will unfold, and help you fill the world, with things as yet unsaid....iip

Terrific write, left with a feeling of wanting more of the great story. It also gives on the opportunity to make choices to help keep the water glowing and leaving the trees green.

good..... really thought provoking.... keep writing little angel

I can diffantly see this poem being publised, like when they use different people speaking out on TV in saving the world. Coming from a view point from a youth will diffiantly make an impression on all to see that each one of us can do our part. The real solution of course will never be Totally through man, but through God's promise of the Bible.

Great poem I was able to picture the dark world you described in your poem :) great poem and great message :) ! !

well expressed poem, with message... keep up the good work

Beautiful write.There is solution to all problems. But one must develop scientific attitude and problem solving mind then alone demons can be fought.Narration and rhyming scheme is appealing :)

its sometimes good to notice the evil and disarray rather than always pay attention to a same genre of poems. this was different and dark but later came the light. you put yourself in an altered dimension where no one cared enough until you made them realize the world needs saving. well done!