Friday, June 26, 2009

Into The Deep Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forever shining stars so bright
the trip upon the path of light
the cold dark of spaces shallow
cast upon the distand shadow
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Allen I like your uneque style.

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Sherif Monem 20 July 2010

Very powerful and breath taking.

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Sherif Monem 20 July 2010

Very powerful and breath taking.

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Indira Renganathan 04 August 2009

highly knowledgeable cosmic words.... good catchy verses....last stanza is truthful....thanks

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Ken E Hall 09 July 2009

Into the deep, yes we will always try to crack the knowledge of the universe, a good poem on this subject but the ending said it all..well done regards PS and thanks

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Jithu Varghese 08 July 2009

Great flow... good stuff... Loved it...

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Mifael Llauderes 26 June 2009

wow, indeed cosmic! technical and academic almost like having a space trip in a ship travelling 10x faster than light! but you see it's really boundless out there and our earth is a mere.00001 micron dot if we are to picture it among them all... and it's the only thing of its kind... and we are abusing it. very good write. thought provoking.

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