Friday, February 10, 2012

Into The Deep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling slowly into the deep
Slipping away from me
Falling yet through the bounds of time
Back to reality
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Valerie Dohren
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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2018

Man has an ocean inside and, Falling slowly into the deep Towards eternity Slipping away from all that is Into the shining sea Simply great thought.

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Robert Green 09 April 2012

Hope you can get there, for some its too far, a great thought and write again Val :)

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Vanessa Hughes 30 March 2012

Love this too, the deep describes our innermost peace perfectly. x

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