Sunday, May 1, 2016

Into The Black Hole Comments

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Into the black hole heaven of heart
You will go, when death comes beckoning.
In the hidden vortex of no-time,
Unknown colors await your discovery;
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Patti Masterman
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Bri Edwards 12 July 2016

Pamela says philosophical. no wonder i don't get it. :) bri

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Pamela Sinicrope 18 May 2016

A very philosophical write expressed through moving imagery. The title and the use of the terms Black Hole, No-time, and vortex almost make my stomach hurt because I imagined movement at light speed backwards into a beating heart! Then I was slowed down by the closing couplet and felt more comfortable. I haven't read of death being expressed in quite this way. I found this very interesting. None of us 'knows' what death will be like, but unknown notes and colors are enticing and comforting. Thanks for sharing.

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