Friday, April 29, 2011

Into The Abyss Comments

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As I fall into the abyss,
I close my eyes and ask myself, 'Am I gonna die? '
Falling, I am falling
I hear someone calling,
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Suzaku Vaneko
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Shihabudheen K J 06 December 2012

A very deep write.feel like once we should fall into such an abyss rather than absorbed by soil.

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The 4am Poet Worm 23 May 2012

life is an abyss... you fall right down untill you run out of time...and the fall is scarey but you wish you could do it again....

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