Into Paradise Comments

interesting poem i like the imagery and your way to express it good thought and well writted

it's a poignant walking thru the question of life and death... brilliant

Life is a dance before GOD

...so many philosofical question are mentioned in your poem.... 'Death is beautiful if thy know the secret behind the wall of life' ...and to be beautiful the death you have to live! ! ! ...'to resolving the secrets of life'! ! ! to try seek the beauty of life! ! !

Great write I understand where you're coming from I too believe death is almost like a free pass to paradise. A paradise on Earth thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

Death is a subjet we all are fasinated by more so in our youth. Eddy don't forget the less is more rule talk to other poets about it and you also mix now speak with bible speak if you ar going to use thee, thy and thou do it all the way through the piece or leave it out. Paddy

Thinking back to when I was at your age most kids that age are writing about death as if they know it up close and personal. Or they are drawing some macob kind of drawings. Your words speaks wisdom of the role that death might play in ones life, but living is so much better, don't you think? Ten on this one my young poet. God's Servant, Linda

A positive view of death you have shown. A profound piece it is.

You are certainly not Wrong My Friend, You are Right as you can be at your age. Trust me when I say that Death is not the only Doorway available. Watch this Space within the Poetic Muse of both Masters and Novices. You will see, you will see.View and write to me again I wish to encourage You. Kind Regards Philip.

nice write............

OOOh. Me likey. It sounds kinda like what the second person in Death Fear It Not would explain to the first person. Great write

Profound thought. great narration. nicely written. deserves 10+++++