Into Life You Will Flow Comments

I love this poem, Keep writing! !

Suzan, That is one of the best leading lines that I have ever read, ... magnificent simplicity! B.V.A.

yes -we need to let go....why is it so difficult..independence is so over rated! An interesting and different poem from you..I like the way your mind works..Pia

Agreed. I understand. Simple as that. Ez

I really like this one Suzan, full of good advice! I shall try and take heed! HG: -)

Do you write songs? A lot of these sound like you could put music to them.

The use of parallelism (in this particular instance, the repetition of the lines 'Know what you know' as well as 'Into life you will flow.....Contented') greatly enhances the poem's effectiveness. Good choice of theme and rhythmic structure. Warmest regards, Greg

this is a nice piece of art Suzan!

A very wise and musical message. Regards, Sandra