Thursday, February 15, 2007

Into I Drifted Comments

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How farther from the Kingdom can You be,
My Father?
If we greet on one level when we meet...AGAIN!
I'm told that YOUR glow is tremendously bright,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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R R 15 February 2007

Very unique Lawrence, I find you are writing different then before. There is a change in your writing, but a good change. Excellent write. Take care.

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Joe Breunig 15 February 2007

An interesting write; at times, it's very difficult to understand how God really sees us; trying to keep our spirit awake to enjoy His Presence has its challenges; nicely done. Perhaps you would enjoy my poem 'Unfinished' which parallels pieces of this write. -Joe

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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