Saturday, February 18, 2006

Into Her Comments

Rating: 4.8

into her perfection I will plunge
(with naught but a flame,
and my indefatigable tongue.
then I’ll spin her spirit like a spider
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Jackson Riley
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Amberlee Carter 28 February 2006

I would love to sit and talk with you over a cup of coffee..Your mind is a beautiful universe.

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 February 2006

I like your innovation in this theme, Jackson. I like the whole poem, actually! Have a 9 from me. Regards, Gina.

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***** ********* 18 February 2006

I love that infatigable tongue line Jack! lol Wonderfully inspiring work indeed. She is a very lucky girl. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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