Friday, February 22, 2013

Into Darkness Comments

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Running in the darkness
lost deep in my past,
I feel how hands pull me further
into this thick sinking mass.
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Javier Falcon
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Joshua Fegley 23 February 2013

You too man? I thought I was the only one. Good poem Javier Falcon.

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Titi Dale 22 February 2013

Darkness can be lit up into light :) this is a great poem!

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Babatunde Aremu 22 February 2013

A nightmare? What a scary experience. Darkness is a place of loneliness and fear. Nice write, I like it. Pls read my poems and comment

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2013

all alone in the dark. I like it. thanks.

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