Friday, April 18, 2008

Into A Stormy Window Comments

Rating: 4.8

The light taping of the snow above
She awakes to a blurry vision
A soft smile to the binding warmth
And looks out to the frosty adhesion.
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

very enchanting verses for a first piece.........keep it up pal..........its a 10 for sure

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 April 2008

A most interesting poem and one that I shall read again. Gw62

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Paul Butters 19 April 2008

As I said on the poetry writing forum, this is a good atmospheric poem. Check title though. All The Best. Paul.

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