Interview On A Train Comments

cute. i love this image of some random businessman sitting there and you sitting across from him making him nervous.: P nice description of him. i really liked how you described his hair 'salon hair' i know exaclty what you mean.

Fascinating piece of work, you've done well. Great twists with your observations - what ever good poet needs.

Good poem, Sheila...right down to the sour whiskey coming from his pores. Skye