' Intertwined Souls ' Comments

..........10/10! (a complete U. beautiful)

this is the poem that got me me hooked to poetry..also love interwined souls the ending..10s yet again

' INTERTWINED SOULS ' emotionally expressed.

as you become lovers and soulmates,2 people often have they're souls intertwined. this epic tale is truly and honorably expressed. beautiful way with words. i dont usually read nor do i ever write poetry, but i was looking for a way to express my feelings to my mate, and no card could. but you have. you and your poem. gave it a 10...although i dont know what the rating means, and i am hoping that 10 is the best score, and 1 is the worst.

Hi Krissi, from my point of view, you've wrote it so well.This is in fact the tell tale of human passion, which is love.

beautiful poem.good composition. enjoyed reading. voted10 surya

i casually visit poem writing websites for passion, yet bold poetry..i have read several of your poems, and am fascinated by your work..i can tell by reading these brilliant, and eventful tales that you write about occurences in your life...continue to do so, and you may just beat out emily matthews, hallmark, and so forth

this piece is well said. I was told once by one of my mentors that the key to poetry is to be able to say lots in a few. to be honest, I don't like very long poems though i have a few. But this was good and did its job well.

so interwined are your emotions with words - like silkiness of moons rays are interwined with loveliness of nature forming a wonderful sight 10++