Monday, August 3, 2009

'Intertwined Souls' (Ending) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(intertwined souls is very long, so i put the ending here, so if you want to read all of it, you could...i also ended the 1st verse, so it makes sense)

we make the loose bines, more defined
we make them more tight, and more strong
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krissi b'williams
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Teresa Babson 29 September 2009

brillant ending to intertwined souls

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James Mclain 26 September 2009

some times it just seems like one never ending inward spiral..iip

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Putholi Arumugham 08 August 2009

why did you end: ( i want it never to end....

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