Interstices... Comments

There's a lot of artful language in this poem. It's such a musical poem. Are you musical? 'like seas between continents outline the shore, or one note to other ones melody forms.' I chose that verse because of the reference to forming a melody- but in truth choosing one over another verse isn't possible because it's all genius and it fits together like an Egyptian pyramid- can't even squeeze a credit card in between the elements; so perfectly is it composed.