Interpretation Of A Story Comments

Wonderful poem, Elena. A mother losing a child, so well put in words The feelings the loss and love. Love is in the end what counts Love is what will last and survive Very well written, very poetic.

Beauitiful write Elena...your words portrait the essense of human life in well laid out lines...10 for you

Sweet is always in mother lips...And mother is nothing more than love from her, i love this writing...God sure can create anyone and creature without mother, BUT He want everyone to feel the Loves, to stay in relationship, to find strong when it's weak, to smile when we sad, ..LOve is pure delivered from mother, to care them from a small till we all become independent, in circulation of life...so it's very important to care our mother..Such a beautiful poem_Unwritten Soul

a very thought provoking philosophic poem that brings about the truth of life. Nothing waits. Births and deaths in the midst we carry on. While births give us immense plessure and if by hiddn hands of god if that is snatched away, then it is time to brood. But the great leveller, TIME, gives us solace and we move on and on.