Perhaps some clever phrase,
Sprinkled with a nuanced word.
Will elevate this plain poem,
To something less absurd.
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A very self - reflective poem Shaun. I simply love the line, ' Thin bones seeking poetry flesh'...brilliant metaphorical language! It's definitely a deeply reflective, self - aware five from me.
Sometimes the beauty of a poem lies in the hidden message that it imparts. A fascinating poem well crafted. Some of the beautiful lines of this poem resonate with me.