Internally Displaced Persons (Idps) Comments

Poignant and exquisitely worded.

And We, in the smug comfort of our warm, , well fed homes, dare complain! Shame on us. Everyone should read this masterpiece

How very true! All their suffering is in this marvelous yet very sad poem.

Anywhere, Everywhere. The " safe" places are becoming scarce and rare. Wonderful poem. The words are soul driven and truly penetrate my soul.

Dreams lost in water is most beautiful. How appropriate for todays tragedies.

I like the rhetorical questions raised.

Nice poem good use of similes and metaphors.

a very enlightening poem of the plight that is happening right now to innocent people in various places around the world.

Strong expression, heart felt. Makes us think about the need for the hour.

The saddest thing is that in my country we still have idps, our own self creation.

So thoughtful and heart touching poem about the sufferings of the people who become refugee in their own place.They are the victims of bullets both from the extremists and the security agencies for no fault of theirs.Congrats for such great write.

I don't think that the plight of these IDPS (wherever they are) could have been expressed in a more poignant way than has been done in this poem. It is bound to create a profound impact among the right thinking people anywhere in the world. Thanks.

Naseer, I really enjoyed this poem. It was a captivating piece that was not only rhythmic but also empathy driven. Bless you in your writing Naseer and keep animating life's reality with your words =] (10 stars)

This is a good poem. I have heard much about refugee camps in war-torn lands. I wrote one about the homeless in this country, a different view. Read mine – We the Unencumbered – Adeline

From: Vp Ramesan (India ;) To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Date Time: 1/26/2010 11: 40: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: comments Dear Naseer, Your poem 'IDP'S' narrates the chaos and pathos as well as trials and turbulations of the internally displaced human beings. All the continents are confronted with such a miserable condition. Yet the mankind is not prepared to stop violence by man against man. My heart goes to the IDP'S. Congrats! For your poem I give ten marks. Poet Vadakkumpurath Ramesn

Why much blood shedding? Why much shelling? Why mass killing? Why so much of fundamentalism? All’re answered in this poem [thro’ the poetic and empathic hue] Ten+++++++++++ dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page with your comments and or criticism and…if you please.

And it will always be this way. Thank you, Naseer for your letter explaining how life is in your area and that you are in a safe place. I hope you always are and wish so much that the entire world was a safe place. Your poem is so strong and powerful. You have a warm and caring heart. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

a powerful and touching poem...brings to mind the suffering of those poor ill fated people...very well presented sir....10

these words have power and I believe it'll only help their situation. If only we had more power ourselves, the goodhearted? thankyou for this poem

it's so touching.. i love it soo much keep up writting similar poems i love to read your poems really..10+++++++++++......