Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Internally Bleed Comments

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You'll hold on tight while she squeezes out your soul
You'll never know,
She took control
You follow her persuasive words that keep you on this leash
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Estrella Resendez
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Kevin Carney 09 September 2010

Wow, nice write. I love your ending and still has me thinking about it. Great write.

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