and there it was
with its pale light
staring sadly
at the black night
...
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I like it. Being alone, and losing someone is something everyone has to go through. Maybe next time he'll stay :) ~Linley~
You left a comeent on one of my poems so i thought id return the favour. Thats a great poem. The internal fights are the hardest fights. But when you win them, you feel a sense of achievement...
It shows my sadness for him everyday when he left me, getting ready for summer! These are my true feelings! Lilly