Thursday, December 1, 2011

Intermission Comments

Rating: 4.4

Lay low, my heart, for just awhile
And rest in sorrow's healing grip
For bitter pain brings bitter smile
To reanimate my frozen lip
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Heather Marie Mortimer
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 October 2019

Write comment. Impressive piece, Heather. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2017

Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem well articulated and elegantly brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Heather.

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Christina Simmons 17 February 2017

Understanding one's pain is just so complex like poetry. You have describe it in fine art form. Well done my friend. Congrat for being chosen!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 February 2017

Congrats for the well deserved recognition as the poet of the day! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 February 2017

Burning pain which a wound can heal. Brilliant and stunning expression. Heartiest Congrats on the member poem of the Day.

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Clarence Prince 17 February 2017

For broken or burning, it is still a heart... True! And as long as it's ticking there is hope!

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Richard Wlodarski 17 February 2017

...it is still a heart which reflects the beauty behind my sight. And when the heart is broken, sometimes, it feels like an eternity to heal. Well written and very emotional. Congratulations on your well deserved Poem Of The Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 February 2017

Burning pain..... a tearjerker... congrats on being chosen...

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Indira Renganathan 17 February 2017

A very emotional poem...It is that burning pain which a wound can heal...words of depth from the heart.. congratulations on poet of the day

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Tom Allport 17 February 2017

a very sorrowful poem of a heart that was once broken? but time is the greatest healer to get over them.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 February 2017

I feel! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 17 February 2017

A beautiful poem Heather.Cogratulations on being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

It's such a great poem! ! ! Beautiful penning! ! 10

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

It's such a great poem! ! ! Beautiful penning! ! 10

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