Wednesday, July 1, 2009

*interlude's Comments

Rating: 2.7

Intervening periods of time, an interlude, living all inclusive
No part do you elude, not one of us exclusive
It brings benediction and blessing
Sends sorrow, worry, distressing
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Linda Moore
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C. P. Sharma 17 July 2009

Thought provoking. It depends on how you look at it. I think life is a rose, its thorn prics are the interlude to make it appear more beautiful. Thomas Hardy thinks happiness as an occasional interlude in the general drama of pain. Anyway, an admirable attempt. CP

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 July 2009

insightful.......fine composition! .....10+

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 03 July 2009

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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rago rago 01 July 2009

pain...........always make us in a fix......... very good write........

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