Surreptitiously, I
Gaze upon your face
Set in deep repose,
Offering scant clues of
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Gazing upon face and sprinkling love is very amazing with this sharing. Wonderful drafting shared...10
Greetings! Thank you for your interest and comment and your very kind rating. I am most glad you found it an enjoyable read. Best wishes!
R B, I love this poem and am going to rate it a ten even though it contains one small typo that I'm sure you will fix later. In line eight, I'm sure you meant LOVED ONE instead of LOVED ON.
Thank you, Kim for your observation (taken care of) and your very generous rating. I am most pleased you found the work to your liking. Best wishes and thanks, again!