Monday, August 25, 2014

Interior Twilight Comments

Rating: 2.0

Rocking to rhythms around firelight of yesterday's camp fire,
being lit, illuminating midnight darkness so life can be seen
and touched once again.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Kay Staley 25 August 2014

Interesting use of drastic language. It leaves a vague feeling that you remember after the poem is over, but the poem itself is not memorable. The weak point: no rhymes makes it an easy one to slip right out of the readers mind. The strong point: The name is very catching and the poem sucks you into its mystery. Its good in the moment, but without rhymes it wont be remembered.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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