Monday, September 14, 2015

Interior Duel Comments

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Your mind conceals and contradicts the truth
When your bonnie heart through your eyes does shine;
Trembling jocundly with expectation as a child,
But you, with stubbornness your heart decline.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Terry Craddock 30 September 2020

Circles Within Circles ripples on the water thought circles within circles crystal liquid light Inspired by the poem 'Interior Duel' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the Mihaela Pirjol.

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2019

A superb write, deep and thought-provoking!

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Dimitrios Galanis 31 January 2016

So cleverly a simple thought transformed into a sensitive poem.

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2015

Poems inspire poems, ripples on the water, thought circles within circles. Words Exposed In Thought Poetic Verse explore words throughout thought poetic verse mind conceals contradicts in truth interplays emotions expressed feelings play within minds Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Interior Duel' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 17 September 2015

loved this line 'Your mind conceals and contradicts the truth' and the interplay of emotions as expressed plays with so many feelings emotions I have loved to explore throughout thought and poetic verse :) 10+

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