Friday, August 31, 2012

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Rating: 4.5

Dreams of it
Illusions of
The taste
The touch
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Jenofpoetry Robinson
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Stevie Taite 01 September 2012

Hate of it Because there is a need for it Love A very poiniant message. We do all so need to be loved in this way! It can tear at our soul and anything that does that will at times make us frustrated and angry. Ps wish this site had spell check. Think I spelt poiniant wrong. You would think a site like this would invest!

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Jenofpoetry Robinson 31 August 2012

Stevie I appreciate the feed back can you elaborate on how i am trying to hard?

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Stevie Taite 31 August 2012

Powerful but sad poem. Try not to try too hard! X

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