Monday, September 17, 2018

Intercourse Comments

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-Intercourse-

With all the colours that thou ow'st,
Cometh to my being sterile by being alone.
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Prabir Gayen
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Shreya Ghosh 11 June 2020

That brings forth restlessness without root. The rootless Immensity wilt writ our charged body into unified whole. The wholeness wilt stem from wholeness and wholeness wilt be our whatness. .....////

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2018

(cont.) and intercourse to me translates into entering (and exiting) a. but perhaps you had something else in mind? even without necessarily understanding, i enjoyed the sound of the poem as i read it. bri :) p.s. wilt writ is either a typo or too poetic for me!

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2018

Ah, allegory. that may help explain why i probably did not understand well with one reading and will not read again, lest i wilt. speaking of wilt, i think you are using wilt as a form of the verb will, but so far, online, i only see stuff (mostly) about plants becoming limp. now, limp is something a guy (and gal/girl) often do not wish for during intercourse. (cont.)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2018

apart from virgin typo its like Shakespeares OTHELO GOETH THOU AND READEST WOW

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