Interaction Comments

'...Me a dreamer nearly happy....' It is very beautiful sounds, my friend - romantic

I enjoy reading your description. I wasn't completely sure if this was a squirrel or a woman! I think the point though is that it's the former. I like reading your longer pieces like this one.

This is very lovely to me in some fashion.

Great poem! I esp. love the line, 'The sun had just mounted to burn out the day.'

Wonderful Lyric! ! ! Highly Metaphoric! 'Was it a spoof, a warning or a squirrel Regard? ' 'To watch my looks... memory and desire in vacant hours' as if giving room for your imagination to roam! KIP THAT PET! ! ! 9 for this! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rave..