Sunday, April 27, 2014

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Sandra Feldman
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Daniel Brick 15 August 2015

You give us the two faces of things: what we need is somewhere, it's not hidden. It's just elsewhere, so keep looking. And: It doesn't respond to blunt requests, bossiness, orders. That's means we have to be patient, right? That's what your poem wants us to realize, right? Neither extreme will help. Learn the middle path to fulfillment.

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