Friday, June 21, 2013

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I would rather receive true love to me given,
Than to be told by the giver delivering it...
What I am getting from them,
Is a love upon me...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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David Wood 22 June 2013

Why have a take away when you can have steak at home. A lovely write.

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Marissa Liebowitz 21 June 2013

This is a great poem!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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