Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Intelligent Monkey Comments

Rating: 5.0

God's creations are in millions
Myriad hues of worms and insects, birds ans animals
Plethora of plants and trees, flowers and fruits!
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Subbaraman N V
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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

dear sir, such a nice poem on monkeys......good observation and well penned

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2008

we have to learn a lot from our nonextinct ancestors although we learnt a lot and have been still learning... a truthful poetic message.... brought out by a nature loving poet...

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Alison Cassidy 27 April 2008

This is a well structured poem that combines years of experience, colorfully delivered information and a finely tuned attentiveness that impresses. Love the story of the monkey shutting off the tap and the slice of Sri Lankan history you share in the last stanza. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Abha Sharma 22 April 2008

It’s amazing that how your lines ventured out and ultimately fused with the ultimate… Man is said to evolve from Apes or monkeys and during this evolution some basic instincts mutated…Shri Ram’s troupe was but the truth. An excellent composition and fusion of thought

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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