Saturday, August 30, 2008

Intelligence Brings Ignorance Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dropp in the ocean,
It disturbs the motion
Of the world, that spins in time to the sound
Of nature’s intention,
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Ellie Sutton
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Tom Balch 05 September 2008

Man, the worse animal on the planet, great work Ellie 10+ regards Tom

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 September 2008

I agree with Great Greenwolf. This is brillient....my 10 similar thought my Mother's plaint

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Ency Bearis 30 August 2008

a very nice flow of verses...excellent write..lovely... Ency Bearis

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 August 2008

I gave this a ten from start to finish. A wonderful display of writing and brilliance. GW62

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Sidi Mahtrow 30 August 2008

Lo, the poor dinosaur That wanted nothing more Than to survive and live well On planet earth, as geology does reveal. Buried deep within the bowel(s) Where they and others now dwell, They embraced the good life as they live(d) Unaware that the substance they would give Would be scorned. By those who have warned 'You'll damage the earth as we know it. Be kind.' But in coming eons others will find That the progress which we share Is but a moment in history, so be aware That what it is that you hope to achieve Is but a moment's reprieve. Status quo is not long maintained In the cosmos, where nothing ever remains the same. s

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